Very good. Now, (leave it up to a fellow typospherian to completely miss the point and ask something inane) what kind of ribbon are you using on that thing? That's pretty crisp - did you use Richard's carbon-film ribbon method?
It's a regular ribbon...one of Jay's, I think. The SG-1 itself seems to be responsible for much of the crispness. Give it a halfway decent ribbon in it and it happily churns out beauteous type.
Nice! That's exactly how I felt this morning, after complicated dreams that I couldn't quite put back together again.
ReplyDeleteNice poem! good thing you had that SG1 on the nightstand.
ReplyDeleteI like both the wording and the style. It portrays a good feeling. I also like that it has rhyme and meter yet without being cheesy.
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ReplyDeleteI've been there before, myself. Nice poem.
ReplyDeleteVery good.
ReplyDeleteNow, (leave it up to a fellow typospherian to completely miss the point and ask something inane) what kind of ribbon are you using on that thing? That's pretty crisp - did you use Richard's carbon-film ribbon method?
It's a regular ribbon...one of Jay's, I think. The SG-1 itself seems to be responsible for much of the crispness. Give it a halfway decent ribbon in it and it happily churns out beauteous type.
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