Sunday, February 27, 2011

A sleepy morning sort of poem...

Nice to just daydream for a few extra moments before getting up on a Sunday morning...though the daydreams always seem to get away from me!

7 comments:

Richard P said...

Nice! That's exactly how I felt this morning, after complicated dreams that I couldn't quite put back together again.

notagain said...

Nice poem! good thing you had that SG1 on the nightstand.

snohomishwriter said...

I like both the wording and the style. It portrays a good feeling. I also like that it has rhyme and meter yet without being cheesy.

Art said...

Like.

Strikethru said...

I've been there before, myself. Nice poem.

Duffy Moon said...

Very good.
Now, (leave it up to a fellow typospherian to completely miss the point and ask something inane) what kind of ribbon are you using on that thing? That's pretty crisp - did you use Richard's carbon-film ribbon method?

Little Flower Petals said...

It's a regular ribbon...one of Jay's, I think. The SG-1 itself seems to be responsible for much of the crispness. Give it a halfway decent ribbon in it and it happily churns out beauteous type.