Friday, July 01, 2011

July Vignette #1

Here we go, per Art's challenge... Hopefully this counts as a vignette?

Vignette 1

3 comments:

Richard P said...

Well done -- it's a whole story in 2 paragraphs!

Anonymous said...

A wonderful depiction of a sensitive little girl. And while complete in itself, it makes the reader imagine what the adult will be like based on two paragraphs.

Jeff The Bear

Little Flower Petals said...

Just for clarification ('cause it just occurred to me a lot of folks probably didn't understand this bit), out here the last syllable of "Oregon" is kinda sorta pronounced "gun" (almost just "gn"), definitely *not* "gone," as it is often pronounced by folks elsewhere. I honestly do remember being really bothered by that as a kid.