Monday, July 18, 2011

Vignette #6 - Spat (and now for something completely different...)

Total fiction this time around, and right at the edge of what I'm comfortable with writing.

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I may expand this into a short story some day. I'd like to know who these people are, and...maybe not so much redeem them as set them off on the road toward redemption.

3 comments:

Little Flower Petals said...

You know, this is enough out of my norm that all day today, I was thinking of yanking it down when I got home from work. Then I got home from work, and since it's the first nice day we've had in forever, I mowed the lawn. And in the process, I somehow whacked my right thumb but good--bent the nail way back so it hurts like a son-of-a-gun. And then I went to take the trash out to the curb and mashed my left big toe. So...now this kind of fits my mood, and I guess I'll leave it. It is what it is and I am what I am, and sometimes these are the sorts of scenes that run through my head...

deek said...

I enjoyed the realistic conflict. And conflict is what keeps a reader reading, so good job!

Little Flower Petals said...

Thanks!